tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5813368068427651793.post119277462002775447..comments2023-10-28T03:19:59.406-07:00Comments on Cheryl Peugh's Worlds: Struggling, and Friday Snippet, August 22, 2008Cheryl Peughhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15885512982460748399noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5813368068427651793.post-75537096523772290862008-08-23T19:53:00.000-07:002008-08-23T19:53:00.000-07:00I enjoyed your snippet--seems very much like a fab...I enjoyed your snippet--seems very much like a fable/fairytale beginning. I'd be interested in hearing more about the class too. I couldn't afford to do it this time around.Joely Sue Burkharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17895058332587825648noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5813368068427651793.post-46918998660570921392008-08-23T17:08:00.000-07:002008-08-23T17:08:00.000-07:00Ah, yes, the Dot and the Line. I guess numerous pe...Ah, yes, the Dot and the Line. I guess numerous people have been having trouble with that one. On the forum (in case you missed it), Holly said she is going to rewrite/extend that lesson and repost it, after she finishes writing Lesson 7.<BR/><BR/>-TimK<BR/><BR/>P.S. Here's my snippet (just forgot to include it earlier): http://blog.jtimothyking.com/2008/08/22/something-i-would-be-embarrassed-to-be-seen-with-friday-snippet Trying a slightly different writing technique.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5813368068427651793.post-22964042344830476052008-08-23T16:40:00.000-07:002008-08-23T16:40:00.000-07:00I'm cpeugh there, Tim. I haven't posted to the fo...I'm cpeugh there, Tim. I haven't posted to the forums much. This is the lesson about the Dot and the Line.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5813368068427651793.post-81120149518207580552008-08-23T16:23:00.000-07:002008-08-23T16:23:00.000-07:00Hi, Cheryl. I find that Holly's Create a Character...Hi, Cheryl. I find that Holly's Create a Character Clinic invaluable for helping me past character blocks. I don't know specifically what you're running up against, but what I end up doing is forcing myself to answer non-obvious questions from the character clinic, and to answer them in a way that explains why my character does what he does. This is great for both heroes and villains.<BR/><BR/>I don't know if I've seen you at the <I>Think Sideways</I> forums. Is this part of Lesson 7 you're working on?<BR/><BR/>-TimKAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com