Rhea Taylor paused in the doorway of her flat, hand frozen in the act of removing her keys from the door lock. In the deepest shadows of her living room, but still visible, stood her brother.
"Charles?" she whispered.
Hands shaking, she fumbled for the light switch. When light flooded her living room, no one stood there.
Of course.
Charles had been dead for five years.
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9 comments:
I love ghost stories. Interested to see what happens next.
I'm with Holly. What happens next?
More please.
I agree -- I love ghost stories! Great start.
oooo good and creepy!
That got my attention.
You tease! Come on, you ca't leave it there!
What a great short snippet! You obviously have everyone's attention now!
Sounds good.
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